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the chart show the numer of inter national student from four contries that a european university had from 2004 to 2008.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feayures, and make comparisons where relevent

the chart show the numer of inter national student from four contries that a european university had from 2004 to 2008.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feayures, and make comparisons where relevent
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This
 chart
indicates
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gives information about how the number of
oversea
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overseas
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 students applying for
an
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a
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 European university
changes
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changed
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 in
China
,
Japan
,America and
Russia
 between 2004 and 2008.
Overall
 it is clear to see that
Russia
 had the least
applicants
 during the whole period, and
expect
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except for
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 2008,
China
 is the country that most
applicants
come
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came
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 from. In more detail,
China
 has a decline curve during the
half decade
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half-decade
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, In 2004, There
are
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were
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 more than 250,000 people
applied
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who applied
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 from
China
. In 2008 ,
however
, the numbers had dropped to 150,000
applicants
. On the
oter
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other
 side, we can get the information that the
applicants
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number of applicants
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 from
Japan
 and
Russia
were increasing
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increased
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 yearly from 2004 to 2008,
Furthermore
,
Japan
had
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apply
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doubled from 5000 to 10000 in
this
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these
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 five years, which is an impressive figure.
Last
 but not least,
There
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there
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 are
also
 many
applicants
 from America every year. The data point out that in
the
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apply
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five years, there are more than 800,000 people
apply
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applying
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for
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to
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 European universities. In conclusion, the number of
applicants
 from the four countries shows
different
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a different
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 trend
during
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from
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 2004 to 2008,
For example
,
China
 shows a downward trend but
Japan
 and
Russia
indicates
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indicate
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a
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an
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 upward tendency.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words china, japan, russia, applicants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "indicates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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