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The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.

The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.
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The provided line graph illustrates the number of
books
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 read by
males
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 and females in Burnaby Public Library from the year 2011 to 2014, in a period of three years.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the number of
books
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 borrowed by men increased every single year.
To begin
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 with, starting from approximately 3000
books
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 read by
males
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,
this
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 figure rose marginally to nearly 4000, followed by a significant increase to reach a peak of 140000 over the next two-year period.
On the contrary
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, the amount of
books
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 which were rented by females was nearly 2000 more than
males
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. A dramatic growth took place in the year 2001 to 2012, before dropping to the lowest level, with around 7000.
On the other hand
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, it was evident that both figures were around 10000 in 2013.
Although
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 females borrowed more
books
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 than
males
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 did in the beginning, the number of
books
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 which were read by men was one time more than those rented by women.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, males with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • library
  • gender
  • reading habits
  • compare
  • significantly
  • trends
  • increase/decrease
  • consistent
  • fluctuate
  • period
  • summarise
  • graph
  • public library
  • books read
  • Burnaby Public Library
  • 2011 to 2014
  • male
  • female
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