The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries for UK residents to visit
Information about the
number
of tourists to the UK
and the number
of UK
citizens, who visited other countries, for a twenty year
period is presented by a line graph. Data about the most popular places among the British in the year 1999Add a hyphen
twenty-year
,
are illustrated by a bar chart.
Remove the comma
apply
Overall
, the number
of visitors coming to the UK
almost doubled, people
leaving the Correct word choice
and people
UK
for traveling
purposes multiplied almost five times. Change the spelling
travelling
Also
, France is noticeably the most popular destination.
In 1979 the number
of tourists, who traveled
abroad, and those, who visited the Change the spelling
travelled
UK
is
almost equal, close to ten Wrong verb form
was
million
. Both experienced a steady rise,
when in 1986 the values reached twenty Remove the comma
apply
million
for the residents leaving the country and around twelve million
for those who come
to it. Wrong verb form
came
Then
a dramatic rise is seen, which continues throughout the whole period, reaching its peak in 1999 with almost 55 million
citizens, who decided to visit other countries and nearly 30 million
, who got to see the beauty of the United Kingdom.
For the British
the most interesting destinations in 1999 were Turkey, Greece and USA, which were all visited by less than five Add a comma
,British
million
people. Other popular places were Spain with close to ten million
and of course France with more than eleven million
tourists from the UK
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