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Some people say that celebrities who want to make a difference do it just for publicity . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

#people #celebrities #difference #publicity
Nowadays,it is often said that famous people who are trying to protest and make any kind of difference are just doing it to gain more fans and seem a better
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. I would say that I partly agree with
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, I believe that not all celebrities are like
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 and a lot of them are just doing it because they are truly trying to make changes.
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, there are some arguments against the statement.
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 their fame in order to promote some sort of helpful information.
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, I believe that famous people are using their popularity for good. There is a great example like Angelina Jolie, who really is a humanist and environmentalist,she is often seen
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 all over the globe helping both kids and grown-ups from low-income countries.
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,a lot depends on the way the person has been raised. If a former celebrity once was financially unstable,with a great gain they might want to help others who are going through a similar situation.
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 contrary to those who use their renown to help and promote,
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individuals doing the complete opposite. Unfortunately,popular public figures are frequently taking advantage of charity campaigns for the purpose of becoming more well-known. It is shown by the researchers that only 40% of charities’ money is
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 to go where it has to originally. To summarize, I mostly disagree that celebrities are trying to make a difference only for publicity. Many of them are using popularity for beneficial purposes.
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