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In some countries, companies allow people to work from home. In others, people are still expected to work in office. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

#countries #companies #people #work #home #office
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Working from
home
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 is acceptable for some companies.
wheras
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whereas
, other companies ask their workers to
working
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 from
home
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. Personally,
although
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 some people
allowed
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are allowed
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 to
work
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 from
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houses
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home
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, I believe
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work
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working
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 in
office
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an office
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 is better.
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 with, some argued that employees could do their job from
houses
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 more
effective
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 than at companies
due to
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 staying
home
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 gives them the opportunity to be close to their families which
effect
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 their emotions.so,
Thay
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they
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 may
working
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work
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 better.
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, in survey done in 2023
done in
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university
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 showed that in coved when the
labors
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work
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homes
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home
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 their achievement increased and
that
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is
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apply
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lead
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 to
grow
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in the
persantage
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percentage
 of sell and
buy
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buying
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.
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,it
seem
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 logical that
labor
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labour
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 from
houses
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a
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wonderful idea.
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, others support the
aide
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aid
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a
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apply
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of working from offices and they
supports
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their
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they
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believe
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belief
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withe
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with
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:
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, offices are a professional place and that
mean
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 it has a suitable environment with all
needed
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the needed
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 resources to
done
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do
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 the job in a perfect way.
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, at
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home
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this
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 atmosphere is not available.
Secondly
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, the
encarge
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encouragement
 and
collaborated
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collaboration
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 between
labors
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labourers
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 create the powers that
needed
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are needed
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 to
done
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do
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 their job in a great mood.
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,
according to
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 Oman TV
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the
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a
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 suitable environment is one of the main reasons for increased
employees
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employee
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 achievement. Because of all giving reasons some
argued
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argue
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 that employees should
work
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 in offices . In conclusion,
although
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 there are benefits in both
argument
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arguments
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, I believe working at
instetutions
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institutions
 outweigh working from
houses
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. Because at
instetutions
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institutions
 the great atmosphere and needed resources are available.
while
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, at
home
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 lack
in
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 resources and atmosphere that requires
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