In some countries, companies allow people to work from home. In others, people are still expected to work in office. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Working from
home
is acceptable for some companies.wheras
, other companies ask their workers to Correct your spelling
whereas
working
from Change the verb form
work
home
. Personally, although
some people allowed
to Add a missing verb
are allowed
work
from houses
, I believe Correct your spelling
home
work
in Wrong verb form
working
office
is better.
Correct article usage
an office
To begin
with, some argued that employees could do their job from houses
more effective
than at companies Change the word
effectively
due to
staying home
gives them the opportunity to be close to their families which effect
their emotions.so, Verb problem
affects
Thay
may Correct your spelling
they
working
better. Change the verb form
work
be working
For instance
, in survey done in 2023 done in
Sultan Qaboos Verb problem
at
university
showed that in coved when the Capitalize word
University
labors
Replace the word
labourers
work
from homes
their achievement increased and Fix the agreement mistake
home
that
is
Verb problem
apply
lead
to Replace the word
led
grow
in the Replace the word
growth
persantage
of sell and Correct your spelling
percentage
buy
. Wrong verb form
buying
Therefore
,it seem
logical that Change the verb form
seems
labor
from Change the spelling
labour
houses
a
wonderful idea.
Add a missing verb
is a
However
, others support the aide
Correct your spelling
aid
a
of working from offices and they Correct article usage
apply
supports
Change the verb form
support
their
Change the pronoun
they
believe
Replace the word
belief
withe
: Correct your spelling
with
Firstly
, offices are a professional place and that mean
it has a suitable environment with all Change the verb form
means
needed
resources to Correct article usage
the needed
done
the job in a perfect way. Change the form of the verb
do
While
, at home
Add a comma
,home
this
atmosphere is not available. Secondly
, the encarge
and Correct your spelling
encouragement
collaborated
between Replace the word
collaboration
labors
create the powers that Replace the word
labourers
needed
to Add a missing verb
are needed
done
their job in a great mood. Change the verb
do
For example
, according to
Oman TVAdd a comma
,
the
suitable environment is one of the main reasons for increased Correct article usage
a
employees
achievement. Because of all giving reasons some Change the noun form
employee
argued
that employees should Wrong verb form
argue
work
in offices .
In conclusion, although
there are benefits in both argument
, I believe working at Change to a plural noun
arguments
instetutions
outweigh working from Correct your spelling
institutions
houses
. Because at instetutions
the great atmosphere and needed resources are available.Correct your spelling
institutions
while
, at home
lack in
resources and atmosphere that requiresChange preposition
of
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