ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The given bar chart illustrates how much money is spent on a number of various categories
while
examining multiple
age
groups of citizens residing in the United Kingdom in the year 2004.
Overall
, we can identify that food and drink are the highest expenses in the majority of
age
groups, with the exception of spending on restaurants and hotels and entertainment spent by people under the ages of 30 and between 61-75. It is interesting to note that food and drink are popular spending choices amongst senior citizens above the
age
of 76, accounting for more than 20% of their salaries going towards
this
category, which is more than four times the spending made on restaurants and hotels.
Furthermore
, food and beverages remain
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amongst adults in their early 30s and 60s, comprising 12% and 17% of their spending respectively.
On the contrary
, a staggering trend of more than 20% of salaries among elders between the ages of 61-75 spent on entertainment, followed by adults under the
age
of 30 spending approximately 15% of their salaries on restaurants and hotels.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • categories
  • age groups
  • residents
  • United Kingdom
  • steady increase
  • marked decrease
  • peak
  • age bracket
  • lower spending
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