The graph below shows the number of passenger railway journeys made in Great Britain between 1950 and 2004 5
The given graph illustrates the
year
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years
of
1950 to 2004, the Change preposition
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number
of people who had different ways of railway trips in the UK and the measuring unit is in millions.
Overall
, the largest number
of passengers
frequently took the national rail
network for traveling
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travelling
while
the smallest number
of customers used the light rail
and metro systems as their transportation from 1950 to May,
2004.
At first glance, it is clear to see that only the national Remove the comma
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rail
network and London Underground worked for individuals in Britain since 1950 and the number
of passengers
accounted for 1000 million
and 740 million
, respectively; and both of them had similar declining and increasing trends from the middle of 1980 to the year around 2000 (approximately at 700 to 950 million
passengers
). Until the beginning of 1960, people could take the light rail
and metro systems for journeys, however
, the sum of passengers
had merely counted around 10 million
which was 900 times less than the national rail
network.Submitted by mornicayang on
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