The graph below shows the number of passenger railway journeys made in Great Britain between 1950 and 2004 5
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1950 to 2004, the Change preposition
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number
of people who had different ways of railway trips in the UK and the measuring unit is in millions.
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Overall
, the largest Linking Words
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passengers
frequently took the national Use synonyms
rail
network for Use synonyms
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travelling
while
the smallest Linking Words
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of customers used the light Use synonyms
rail
and metro systems as their transportation from 1950 to MayUse synonyms
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2004.
At first glance, it is clear to see that only the national Remove the comma
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rail
network and London Underground worked for individuals in Britain since 1950 and the Use synonyms
number
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accounted for 1000 Use synonyms
million
and 740 Use synonyms
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, respectively; and both of them had similar declining and increasing trends from the middle of 1980 to the year around 2000 (approximately at 700 to 950 Use synonyms
million
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passengers
). Until the beginning of 1960, people could take the light Use synonyms
rail
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however
, the sum of Linking Words
passengers
had merely counted around 10 Use synonyms
million
which was 900 times less than the national Use synonyms
rail
network.Use synonyms
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