The maps show how the industrial area will change into a housing area in the future.

The maps show how the industrial area will change into a housing area in the future.
The given table illustrates certain forecasted alternations in an industrial site, which will be transformed into residential
areas
in the future.
Overall
, the most noticeable changes will be the addition of various buildings to the North and East of the spot;
also
the modification of names of specific
areas
and their facilities will be recorded. Regarding the East side of
this
place, the factory is predicted to be replaced by apartments, which will be located next to the newly added parking area.
While
the current Entrance and Reception are placed to the North, the plan proposes its substitution by residential
areas
including 6-bedroom houses which will be accessed through communal gardens. Significant changes will
also
be projected on the remaining sides of
this
site. The 3-bedroom house and 4-bedroom house will replace the packing and storage
areas
in the Western part.
Additionally
, the substitution of offices and canteen for parking garages is
also
suggested in
this
plan.The only feature
that is
predicted to remain in its original position is the main road which surrounds the whole area.
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