In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

In

this

era,

people

can live for a long time

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to the

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decades. Some

people

think that old age

people

bring problems for

government

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the government

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,

while

others and I believe that they have lots of advantages.

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essay explores both notions and personally, I agree that they have more benefits than drawbacks. First of all, the one who argues they have problems for

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society and governments because they say older age

people

lack the ability to work and the government should spend money

for

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their

lives

.

Furthermore

, if someone visits their home, he or she will see that they can not prepare food, clean dishes, wash clothes or drive for themselves. They need help in most of their

lives

aspect and the government should take care of them and serve them in

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special place.

On the other hand

, the other group argue that they believe older

people

are knowledgeable

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and they are

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experienced

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people

.

Furthermore

, they served human societies when they were young.

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, parents

spent

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thier

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their

lives

to

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their children and they

paid

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lots of

pains

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for

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their children.

In addition

, some of them are professionals

such

as teachers, engineers, athletes, and doctors,

therefore

, it is necessary to learn from them and we should take care

to

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their

lives

instead

of ignoring them.

To sum up

, older age

people

have more benefits than drawbacks, they are knowledgeable

people

and they have lots of

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experience, we can learn from them and they should never

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neglect

them.