The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people in the US, and the effect of children on the overall ratings of married couples. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people in the US, and the effect of children on the overall ratings of married couples. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The set of bar charts provides information about the percentage of satisfaction rating for married and unmarried
people
in the United States and the effect of having
children
on the
overall
happiness level of married
couples
. Broadly, it is readily noticeable that married
people
are happier compared to unmarried ones.
Moreover
,
couples
who had
children
were more pleased than other
categories
. Based on the first chart, married
people
in all age
categories
comprised well over 40%.
People
aged 18-29 contributed the biggest percentage, followed by the commonalities proportion from
people
aged 30-49 and mature
people
, accounting for 44%.
Then
, the lowest fraction of married
people
, ages 50-64 made up exactly 40%.
On the other hand
, the prominent proportion was shown by those aged more than 60 years, it reported a sizable percentage at around a third per cent.
While
, other age
categories
obtained 21%, 21%, and 22% respectively. Turning to the second graph, there was a slightly different happiness rating in all
categories
for
couples
married; it was a mere 1-2% dissimilar.
Couples
who had
children
aged 18-29 years were more delighted, making up 44% of the total proportion. The subsequent
categories
came from parents with no descendants and
children
aged 18 only by 2%.
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