Some people think that governments should use the money to provide faster means of public transport, while others are concerned that there are many more important priorities than public transport. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is a common belief that authorities ought to provide funding for improving modes of public transportation.
However
, there is a more persuasive argument that politicians should set aside money
to develop critical aspects, namely education
and reducing pollution
. The following essay will go through both viewpoints.
To begin
with, i
could be argued that providing citizens with faster forms of public transportation has brought about specific benefits. Correct pronoun usage
it
Firstly
, more
rapid form of transport can help people, especially commuters, reduce travelling time from home to work location. Correct article usage
a more
Therefore
, they wil
have more leisure time to prepare before going to work or study, Correct your spelling
will
for example
, they are
able to enjoy breakfast with family or the girls can spend 1-2 hours beautifying themself. Wrong verb form
will be
Secondly
, public transports
Fix the agreement mistake
transport
diminish
air Correct subject-verb agreement
diminishes
pollution
. Less fuel and gas burned means better air quality that integrate
public transit. Change the verb form
integrates
As a result
, environmental problems, such
as greenhouse effects, ice melt phenomenon,..., can be limited and bring to
residents a fresh and peaceful living environment, which will improve Change preposition
apply
condition
of life.
Add an article
the condition
Nevertheless
, i
support the idea that government should spend Change the capitalization
I
money
on education
and solving pollution
. Undeniably, education
is an indispensable tool in
self-improvement. Change preposition
for
Therefore
, building many schools for children, adding swimming pools, soccer
fields,... and preparing modern equipment to support learning Correct word choice
and soccer
such
as televisions, laboratories, and computer rooms,...should be done now to create a closer and smarter studying environment for children. Moreover
, Money
can also
be used to invite foreign professors and teachers to serve English learning or inspirational
speakers, Change preposition
to inspirational
influencers
to help students gain new knowledge and more skills. Regarding, spending on reducing Correct word choice
and influencers
pollution
will bring many benefits for health Add an article
the pollution
especially
in cleaner Add the comma(s)
,especially
and
water. There will be no more respiratory and skin diseases caused by air problems or marine life threatened by waste. Correct word choice
apply
For instance
, Japan's discharging radioactive waste into the sea, polluting the sea and adversely affecting human health is a problem that the authorities should utilize the money
to solve.
To sum up
, while
it is apparent that there are many long-term benefits of improved methods of transportation, it is undeniable that we cannot be oblivious to its impacts on cost, environment or education
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