Some people think that governments should use the money to provide faster means of public transport, while others are concerned that there are many more important priorities than public transport. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is a common belief that authorities ought to provide funding for improving modes of public transportation.

However

, there is a more persuasive argument that politicians should set aside

money

to develop critical aspects, namely

education

and reducing

pollution

. The following essay will go through both viewpoints.

To begin

with,

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could be argued that providing citizens with faster forms of public transportation has brought about specific benefits.

Firstly

,

more

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rapid form of transport can help people, especially commuters, reduce travelling time from home to work location.

Therefore

, they

wil

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will

have more leisure time to prepare before going to work or study,

for example

, they

are

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able to enjoy breakfast with family or the girls can spend 1-2 hours beautifying themself.

Secondly

, public

transports

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transport

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diminish

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air

pollution

. Less fuel and gas burned means better air quality that

integrate

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public transit.

As a result

, environmental problems,

such

as greenhouse effects, ice melt phenomenon,..., can be limited and bring

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residents a fresh and peaceful living environment, which will improve

condition

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the condition

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of life.

Nevertheless

,

i

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support the idea that government should spend

money

on

education

and solving

pollution

. Undeniably,

education

is an indispensable tool

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for

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self-improvement.

Therefore

, building many schools for children, adding swimming pools,

soccer

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and soccer

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fields,... and preparing modern equipment to support learning

such

as televisions, laboratories, and computer rooms,...should be done now to create a closer and smarter studying environment for children.

Moreover

,

Money

can

also

be used to invite foreign professors and teachers to serve English learning or

inspirational

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to inspirational

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speakers,

influencers

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and influencers

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to help students gain new knowledge and more skills. Regarding, spending on reducing

pollution

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the pollution

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will bring many benefits for health

especially

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in cleaner

and

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apply

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water. There will be no more respiratory and skin diseases caused by air problems or marine life threatened by waste.

For instance

, Japan's discharging radioactive waste into the sea, polluting the sea and adversely affecting human health is a problem that the authorities should utilize the

money

to solve.

To sum up

,

while

it is apparent that there are many long-term benefits of improved methods of transportation, it is undeniable that we cannot be oblivious to its impacts on cost, environment or

education

.