The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
Information about the process of brick manufacturing is depicted by a diagram.
Overall
, there are seven main steps. Starting with the extraction of materials, then
processing then
and Rephrase
apply
finally
delivering the final product.
The first step is
mining clay with a digger. Second,
the clay gets put on a metal grid, which separates the smaller parts, which fall to a roller below the grid, from the bigger ones. After that sand and water are added to the clay. There are two
ways to get the mixture to the desired well-known shape. The options are with a wire cutter or with a mould. Either way, after that the bricks have to dry for one or two
days. The next step is
putting them in a kiln with very high temperatures going from two
hundred degrees Celcius to over 1300 degrees. Cooling takes between two
and three days. Finally
, the product is packed and delivered.Submitted by evamironova65 on
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