As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many individuals believe that businesses have social responsibilities, alongside earning
money
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However
, I partly agree with Linking Words
this
statement.
Some people think that companies should only concentrate on making Linking Words
money
rather than their social responsibilities for two main factors. Use synonyms
Firstly
, if a factory considers the social effects of their products excessively, they will suffer from the hard-tight rules and standards, which prevent the Linking Words
business
from progressing. Use synonyms
In other words
, these corporations will be asked to be more cautious and not to take risks in order to gain more Linking Words
money
. Use synonyms
For example
, if companies that work on AI were worried about people's personal security too much, they would not make Linking Words
such
progress that they have made by now, as they have access to every detail of a person's life. Linking Words
Secondly
, caring about the social impacts of a Linking Words
business
sometimes affects the income of a factory as well. After producing a product, it can bring about some side effects for consumers, and if the producer is responsible for paying compensation, their income will become lower, because they have to cover the damages made to the consumers.
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On the other hand
, businesses should be socially responsible for two major reasons. These traders are doing Linking Words
business
in a country, and they are more powerful than ordinary people, Use synonyms
due to
the fact that they have more Linking Words
money
. Use synonyms
Thus
, they must be responsible to the public. It is a global rule that those who earn more Linking Words
money
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business
must take responsibility as well. Use synonyms
Moreover
, in some cases, safety is more important than making progress. To exemplify, biotechnological goods are really dangerous and should be used and produced in a safe manner. These products can easily create health issues like those related to one's digestion. Linking Words
As a result
, their producers have to take care of Linking Words
this
situation.
In conclusion, even though companies are trading and making Linking Words
money
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also
consider social responsibilities for numerous reasons.Linking Words
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task response
The essay partially addresses the prompt and provides relevant arguments both in favor of and against the idea of businesses having social responsibilities. However, the position taken is not entirely clear, and some points could be more fully developed.
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The essay has a generally logical structure, but the introduction and conclusion could be more distinct. The body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences for each argument and could be more cohesive.
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The essay demonstrates a moderate range of vocabulary and uses some appropriate collocations and expressions. However, some word choices are imprecise, and there is room for improvement in using academic vocabulary relevant to the topic.
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