You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter describe the item explain where and when you left it say what action you would like the company to take

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Dear Sir/Madam My name is Clementine and I travelled on your train on 15th August 2023 on a train from Paris to London. The departure time was 10h00. I am writing to you because I lost my laptop on it. I had 2 bags, one was yellow and another was red. The red one had a name tag on it and the laptop was inside of it. I was sitting in car 18, seat A87. The was a small table in front of me where I put my two bags after boarding. The

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time I checked the red one was still under the table,

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I am sure that I left it on the train. Please check that place for me and let me know as soon as you find it. Here is my number, please call me and I will come to collect it myself. I appreciate your support on

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. Sincerely

tuclemyFri Sep 01 2023

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Task Response

Check the requirements of the task more thoroughly. Make sure to include a specific request for the action you would like the company to take regarding the lost laptop.

Coherence and Cohesion

The greeting and closing are polite, but they could be more formal for a letter to a company. Consider using "Dear Sir or Madam" for the greeting and "Yours sincerely" or "Yours faithfully" for the closing.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

154 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

valuable
distinguishing features
route
carriage
seat number
lost and found department
appropriate steps
contact information
swift and positive action
item of value

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