The charts below show the average annual spending for canadian households in the year 1972 and the year 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
The presented diagram below
,
showed us the average spending per 12 months for Canadian families in Remove the comma
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both
year
between 1972 and 2002.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, it can be seen that households in both
years have their own priority to spend their money. In 1972 most of these houses spent their cash on food with 22 percent. But looking at the other chat,
seems like they spend most of their money on fancier things like cars with 40 Remove the comma
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percent
.
In the period 2002, the number of households that spent their money on computers reached 11% which created a small gap with the percentage in 1972 of only 3%. And for the other things like petrol and furniture, Change the spelling
per cent
Correct pronoun usage
there weren't
weren't
Correct subject-verb agreement
wasn't
created
a big gap between Verb problem
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both
years because the differences were only 1-2%.
Although
this
thing is the most expensive spending in the chart, cars still hold a high position in the percentage for both
graphs. Both
of the percentages are also
above 20% with 22% in 1972 and 40% in 2002.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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