People in the past would always repair damaged products. However, nowadays, people like to throw out and purchase new products. What are the reasons for this? What problems might this cause?

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always tried to repair
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damaged, but now,
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get away
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them and buy new
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them. In my opinion,
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some reasons and causes drawback. On the one hand,
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some reasons for
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, nowadays,
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most
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income so do not need to repair damaged
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products
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around us with
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different
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and
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purchasing new
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reaping
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causes problems of
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and consumption.
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tend
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have variety
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products
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that they do not need
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or often use them,
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individuals just purchase them and make
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out old
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cause pollution of
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, in order to garbage.
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