The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants
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The
given
chart depicts the quantities of males and females that took part in evening courses at the education centre for adults Verb problem
apply
while
the pie shows the attendees' age groups in 2009.
Overall
, ladies tend to participate more in most of the classes except for the sculpture. Old people
took the majority of the total.
It was estimated that 20 women attend
the drama class, twice more than Wrong verb form
attended
that
Correct determiner usage
the
of
men, Change preposition
apply
the
same ratio Correct word choice
and the
happening
in Wrong verb form
happened
language
class. Painting classes had the smallest differences with 5 more women Correct article usage
the language
joined
than men. Wrong verb form
joining
In contrast
, sculpture
was the only class with more Add an article
the sculpture
male
than Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
.
Young Fix the agreement mistake
females
people
only took 5% of the total participants in the course. The age group of 30 to 39 had the same proportion as the ages of less than 20 to 29 combined, middle-aged people
took 26% of total
amount. Add an article
the total
People
from 50 years old or more joined the most with 42%.Submitted by boocheapofficial on
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