As parents, they should be required to attend parenting courses every year to bring up their children well and give them a better environment for growth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been observed that

health care

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facilities are encouraging

the

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newly blessed

parents

to join parental

program

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. I endorse

this

statement as

this

would be a resolute approach to train the

parents

with adequate knowledge of their

child

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upbringing. The are many benefits people can avail from the parenting

courses

. The schemes are entitled

with

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the

advance

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techniques and pedagogy that

needed

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are needed

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to

up bring

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upbring

the new child. Their teaching structure follows the guidelines

according to

the developmental stages.

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, new

parents

not only acquire

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first hand

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knowledge about the vaccination schedule but

only

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handle the emergency situation meticulously. To cite an example, it has been reported that 67% of

new born

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babies face the colic condition and they cry for

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several hours.

Such

training

courses

help the

parents

to cope with

this

situation. Despite

of

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the fact parental

courses

ameliorate parental skills, the extravagant subscription of parental coach packages

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financial

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burden on them. If the improvised

parents

wanted to enroll

for

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such

expensive programs, they would need to overwork day and night to make ends needs and

subsequently

have detrimental health issues.

However

, taking part in

such

courses

nourches

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nourishes

touches

their self-esteem and they do not have to be dependent

for

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anyone's assistance.

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, if mothers are trained

for

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the

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mother feed, they will not choose bottle feed for their children and

subsequently

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,subsequently

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it would be

cost effective

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and

win- win

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situation for both. In

the

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conclusion,

i

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reiterate that

parents

should be conscious of the beneficial services of the parental

courses

. I believe that

government

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the government

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should set up

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yearly

based

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awareness programs for

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parents

to conquer their parenthood repercussions.