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modern technology is changing our world. this has advantages such as bringing people closer together through communication. it also has disadvantages such as destroying the different between cultures. to what extent do you agree or disagree whis this statment?

#technology #world #people #communication #cultures #whis #statment
As
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technology
 grow rapidly, the advantages
such
 as making a strong bond with others and
also
 disadvantages
such
 as more similarities between different culture have appeared. In
this
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 I will talk about both aspects. Some
people
 claim that
technology
 is very beneficial in our
life
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lives
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. Not only we can communicate with a lot of
people
 around the world, but
also
 it is much faster than before.
Moreover
, we will never feel lonely and isolated in
this
 world. Because
,
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 the internet eliminates any
restriction
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 that used to be in past. Modern
technology
 is so powerful. We can use different apps like WhatsApp in order to chat, video call and send voice to each other during the
day
 whenever we want.
On the other hand
, because of these connections, most of the
people
 nowadays know about different cultures. There are several posts and videos which
people
 share
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 social media.
In addition
, it has many effects
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people
's points of view and culture. They really live to copy their behaviour.
For example
, in
Iran
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 we don’t have a
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valentine
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day
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 in our culture but now, most
of
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the
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people
 celebrate
this
day
 without any knowledge. Because of that, we have a mixture of
the
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festivals and ceremonies in Iran.
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, we have a specific
day
in
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each year for showing our love to our partner which is called Sepandar Mazdgan.
This
 is the time that we appreciate the
kindnes
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kindness
 and
also
 the love sharing that we have in our
life
. In conclusion, the use of
technology
 is unavoidable in our
life
. It has been effected our entire
life
 and we can see it in our modern cultural pattern.
Furthermore
, the pros of
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technology
 in our communication
is
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 undeniable. I completely agree with
this
 opinion.
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