You want to sell your bicycle. Your friend has told you that his cousin might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend’s cousin. In your letter explain why you are selling the bicycle describe the bicycle and how much it will cost suggest a date when your friend’s cousin can come and see the bicycle

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Dear Bella, I hope you're doing well. I heard you

interested

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are interested

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to buy

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in buying

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bicycle

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. So, I wanna describe

you

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to you

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about

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the about

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information

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apply

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the

bicycle

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, I want to sell my

currently

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bicycle

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because

this

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bike is not flexible for me

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sitting on the pad. Because the pad is too small

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it is not comfortable

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I'm riding.

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, I don't like

this

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color

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anymore. Before I love pink

color

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, but not now. Now I like the

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color

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that looks dark.

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this

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bicycle

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is folding

bicyble

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bicycle

. You can put them on your car roof or the back of your car. You can bring them

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any place you want.

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, It is a pink

color

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one

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and 2 wheels. I think it is suitable

with

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you. I

had

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bought it

around

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10,000 Bath. So, I want to sell you in 5,000 Bath.

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if you want to see it

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seeing

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of seeing

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the pictures on

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social. You can come to my home on

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Friday around 2 pm. I'm home on that day. Let me know if you want to buy my

bicycle

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and hope you like it. Best wishes Dream

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

198 words

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