The chart gives information about questionaire results for drinking habits, purchasing fresh tea, and people's coffee in five different Australian cities (Sydney,Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobart). Overall, it is clear from the chart the highest rate of city residents went to a cafe for drinking coffee or tea, while, the lowest rate of them purchased fresh coffee.
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The chart gives information about questionnaire results for drinking habits, purchasing fresh tea, and people's
coffee
in five different Australian cities (Sydney
,Melbourne
, Brisbane
, Adelaide, Hobart
).
Overall
, it is clear from the chart the highest rate
of city residents went to a cafe to drink coffee
or tea, while
, the lowest rate
of them purchased fresh coffee
.
First of all, in the last
four weeks, most Australian citizens went to a cafe to drink coffee
or tea. In three cities as
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Sydney
, Melbourne
, and Hobart
approximately reached to
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however
, this
rate
declined to about 55% in Brisbane
city. Further
, Adelaide City approximately recorded the lowest rate
(50%).
Secondly
, the rate
of people who bought instant coffee
was nearly similar in all cities. In Hobart
and Brisbane
nearly peaked (53%), while
it reduced in Sydney
and was nearly 45%. Moreover
, in
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Melbourne
was between Brisbane
and Sydney
about 47%.
Lastly
, Brisbane
and Adelaide had the lowest rate
nearly (33%), and Hobart
was a little bit more nearly 37%. Additionally
, Sydney
and Melbourne
were nearly increased to 43%.Submitted by bashdar981 on
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