The chart gives information about questionaire results for drinking habits, purchasing fresh tea, and people's coffee in five different Australian cities (Sydney,Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobart). Overall, it is clear from the chart the highest rate of city residents went to a cafe for drinking coffee or tea, while, the lowest rate of them purchased fresh coffee.

The chart gives information about questionaire results for drinking habits, purchasing fresh tea, and people's coffee in five different Australian cities (Sydney,Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobart).

Overall, it is clear from the chart the highest rate of city residents went to a cafe for drinking coffee or tea, while, the lowest rate of them purchased fresh coffee.
The chart gives information about questionnaire results for drinking habits, purchasing fresh tea, and people's
coffee
in five different Australian cities (
Sydney
,
Melbourne
,
Brisbane
, Adelaide,
Hobart
).
Overall
, it is clear from the chart the highest
rate
of city residents went to a cafe to drink
coffee
or tea,
while
, the lowest
rate
of them purchased fresh
coffee
. First of all, in the
last
four weeks, most Australian citizens went to a cafe to drink
coffee
or tea. In three cities
as
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Sydney
,
Melbourne
, and
Hobart
approximately reached
to
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62%,
however
,
this
rate
declined to about 55% in
Brisbane
city.
Further
, Adelaide City approximately recorded the lowest
rate
(50%).
Secondly
, the
rate
of people who bought instant
coffee
was nearly similar in all cities. In
Hobart
and
Brisbane
nearly peaked (53%),
while
it reduced in
Sydney
and was nearly 45%.
Moreover
,
in
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Melbourne
was between
Brisbane
and
Sydney
about 47%.
Lastly
,
Brisbane
and Adelaide had the lowest
rate
nearly (33%), and
Hobart
was a little bit more nearly 37%.
Additionally
,
Sydney
and
Melbourne
were nearly increased to 43%.
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