The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people in the US, and the effect of children on the overall ratings of married couples
The given charts represent the result of a survey on satisfaction levels for married and unmarried
people
in the US, and the effect of Use synonyms
children
on the Use synonyms
overall
ratings of married couples. Linking Words
Overall
, married couples’ percentages are Linking Words
reveals
almost similar in every Verb problem
apply
age
category, Use synonyms
while
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those of unmarried Correct article usage
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shows
a higher percentage in the older ages; Correct subject-verb agreement
show
however
, the rest Linking Words
shares
almost similar numbers.
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According to
the first chart, the proportions of joyful married Linking Words
people
in four various Use synonyms
age
groups are over 40%, and married Use synonyms
people
who are in Use synonyms
age
18-29 are the happiest at 45%. Meanwhile, the happiness percentages of unmarried Use synonyms
people
are clearly lower than Use synonyms
another one
at slightly over 20%, but single Fix the agreement mistake
other ones
people
who are over 65 have a noticeable gap with other Use synonyms
age
groups at almost 35%.
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Further more
, the second bar chart shows that having Correct your spelling
Furthermore
children
does not Use synonyms
give
a significant effect Verb problem
have
to
happiness levels. The highest percentage of satisfaction by married Change preposition
on
people
with Use synonyms
children
under 18 is 44%. Use synonyms
However
, slightly fewer (43%) of married Linking Words
people
are satisfied with their life. Meanwhile, 41% Use synonyms
those
with Change preposition
of those
children
in teenagers and above Use synonyms
age
groups are happy.Use synonyms
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