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Some think newspaper are the best method for reading the news while others think other media is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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A few
individuals
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 believe that magazines are
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 good method of
interpretation
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 the
news
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while
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 some trust that other
spirtualists
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spiritualists
is
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are
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best
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the best
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.
However
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, I shall discuss both views in the upcoming paragraph and a meaningful conclusion. To commence with, There are numerous reasons regarding
newspaper
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 are the best method for reading the
news
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.
Firstly
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, The main reason is that
people
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 are
goood
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good
god
in
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at
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 reading and well perfect to read articles.
Thus
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,
Individuals
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 are only
interesting
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 in
press
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the press
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 rather than
other type
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another type
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 of
news
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. Significantly, At the
time
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 of reading
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a paper
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paper
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,paper
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 they only concentrate on
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news
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the news
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 and enjoy
at
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it at
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 that
time
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 or don't skip scanning.
Secondaly
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Secondly
, If the signal on T.V or mobile phone
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is weak
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so
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, Readers easily read
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news
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the news
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 without any restrictions
beacuse
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because
this
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 service
is
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does
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 not stop.
Moreover
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, Older
people
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also
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 learn
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 because
there
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their
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 main problem of medical issues
such
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 as ears.
For instance
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, In Punjab most
of
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cities older
people
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 read
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papers
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 rather than
other type
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another type
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 of
media
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.
On the other hand
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, There are
also
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plethora
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a plethora
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 of reasons regarding
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. The most prominent one is that
,
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the media
Media
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 provide proper
news
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 regarding the issue.
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, The fortune teller
also
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provide
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 live footage regarding
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.
Furthermore
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, At any
time
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individuals
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listen
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tolisten
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news
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media
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. The other reason is that
,
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apply
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 Some
people
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do
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are
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 not good
in
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at
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 reading. So, They give preference to
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a mind
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 reader.
In other words
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, In online
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news
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,news
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i
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 can
also
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 see
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the face
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face
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faces
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 of criminals but
on
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in
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ther
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the
hand
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 in
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the newspaper
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newspaper
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i
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 can't
see
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themsee
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. To exemplify, In foreign countries
individuals
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 give preference to live
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 and
media
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 rather than readers because they
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tolisten
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news
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 with the help of social
media
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 but
the
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apply
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magazine
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magazines
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 do not carry
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it for
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for
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in
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 some places. That's why
the
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they
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 give
chance
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a chance
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 to
clairvoyant
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clairvoyants
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. In conclusion,
According to
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 my
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perspective
prespective
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i
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I
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 give preference to
spirtualist
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spiritualists
 because
in
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,in
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modern
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the modern
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 era, Most citizens do not have much
time
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 to read. So, they use social 
media
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.
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