Some think newspaper are the best method for reading the news while others think other media is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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individuals
believe that magazines are
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good method of
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the
news
while
some trust that other
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spiritualists
is
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are
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best
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.
However
, I shall discuss both views in the upcoming paragraph and a meaningful conclusion. To commence with, There are numerous reasons regarding
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are the best method for reading the
news
.
Firstly
, The main reason is that
people
are
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good
god
in
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reading and well perfect to read articles.
Thus
,
Individuals
are only
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in
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rather than
other type
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of
news
. Significantly, At the
time
of reading
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they only concentrate on
news
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the news
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and enjoy
at
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it at
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that
time
or don't skip scanning.
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Secondly
, If the signal on T.V or mobile phone
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so
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, Readers easily read
news
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the news
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without any restrictions
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because
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not stop.
Moreover
, Older
people
also
learn
news
because
there
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main problem of medical issues
such
as ears.
For instance
, In Punjab most
of
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cities older
people
read
paper
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papers
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rather than
other type
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of
media
.
On the other hand
, There are
also
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of reasons regarding
media
. The most prominent one is that
,
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the media
Media
provide proper
news
regarding the issue.
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provide
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live footage regarding
news
.
Furthermore
, At any
time
individuals
listen
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news
with the help of social
media
. The other reason is that
,
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people
do
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not good
in
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reading. So, They give preference to
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a mind
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reader.
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, In online
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can
also
see
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the face
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face
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of criminals but
on
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in
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ther
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the
hand
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in
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newspaper
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i
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can't
see
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. To exemplify, In foreign countries
individuals
give preference to live
news
and
media
rather than readers because they
listen
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tolisten
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news
with the help of social
media
but
the
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magazine
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magazines
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do not carry
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it for
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for
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some places. That's why
the
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they
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give
chance
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a chance
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to
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. In conclusion,
According to
my
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perspective
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i
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give preference to
spirtualist
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spiritualists
because
in
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,in
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modern
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the modern
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era, Most citizens do not have much
time
to read. So, they use social 
media
.
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