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The table below shows the production of potatoes, cabbage and onions in five countries in 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The table below shows the production of potatoes, cabbage and onions in five countries in 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The table illustrates the manufacture of three different vegetables (potatoes, onions and cabbage) in five different
countries
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 in 2012. Units are measured in million tonnes.
Overall
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 , the category that all
countries
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 produced the most was cabbage , which was considerably higher than other types of vegetables. The lowest production can be seen in the category of potatoes in all five
countries
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 except
China
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. The production of vegetables in
China
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 was higher than in other
countries
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 . With regards to cabbage,
China
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 manufactured the most at 3187MT, and Russia produced a lot as well at 2765
MT
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 compared to Brazil which did not produce anything.
Spain
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 manufactured 200MT which was ten times higher than Ireland.
On the other hand
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, the lowest production was potatoes,
China
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 produced the most at 9214MT ,
Spain
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 was lowest at only 2MT which was one time lowest than Brazil, and Ireland manufactured about the double amount of
Spain
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 which was 30MT. In the case of Onions , the average manufactured of
countries
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 was between 2602
MT
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 in
China
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 and 2039
MT
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 in Russia . Brazil produced a high amount of 1417
MT
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 compared to both
Spain
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 and Ireland (0 and 4) respectively.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, china, mt, spain with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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