The pie charts show the land distribution of a district in a European city in 3 different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The pie charts show the land distribution of a district in a European city in 3 different years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
Three pie charts provide information about the
land
distribution
of a district in a European city in 2005, 2010, and 2015.
Overall
,
land
used for water bodies purposes stayed the same from 2005 to 2015
while
the
distribution
of natural and agricultural
land
decreased significantly in the same passage of time. In 2005,
land
distribution
for natural and agricultural sections was the highest was approximately half, and
this
proportion
decreased dramatically in 2010, particularly by one-third.
This
proportion
continuously fell by a quarter in 2015. In 2005, 2010, and 2015 the
proportion
of
land
distribution
of water bodies was the same at 16 percent. It can be seen clearly that
land
used for residential and commercial reasons gradually rose by 17
percent
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from 2005 to 2010. The rise of
land
for these purposes was up to 59
percent
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in 2015.
This
proportion
seemed to be
inverse
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the inverse
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ratio to the
proportion
of natural and agricultural
land
.
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