Some people believe that governments should ban dangerous sports. Others claim that they should have freedom to choose their favourite activities. Discuss both views and present your opinion.

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can cause serious damage to

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's lives, making them try to convince the government to enforce the laws to prevent these

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because some of them can die when playing these

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as hiking.

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, other

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argue that they should not do that because these exciting

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can make our life more challenging and escape from our working routine, and

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provide research about

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. In my opinion, I agree with the former view since I was taught about safety first at the university to deal with the future threat. On the one hand, there are many individuals who want to do various

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, and some of them can cause injuries;

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is because these

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can

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our lives from

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, which can reduce the quality of work

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developed by these

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. The latest research,

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, provides information about

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, which does not just cause damage to enterprise life but

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private life. There are several patients who have problems with

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such

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as a lack of communication skills.

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, challenging

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can heal these

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and

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prevent

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disease for employees.

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, the others hold the belief that the government should protect them by enforcing the law that bans these

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. The reason main reason is these

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are not safe at all; they can make the player die during the action times.

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hiking is quite popular in some European countries, it makes approximately 20 players die per year. From my point of view, as an engineering student who was educated about safety

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I cannot play these

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, and I will persuade both my friends and family to ignore them.

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, if these

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are banned, it can reduce the death rate of

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who play

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these

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are exciting and can help

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who suffer from

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, others and I think it better not to let them happen in the first place with help from the government that can ban these

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