Some people say in all levels of English from primary schools to universities tomuch time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people argue that
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the education
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system spends a lot of time
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theoretical skills rather than
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onespractical
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.
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I agree that real-based experience
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to be essential, I do not agree with the fact that learning facts time should be decreased. On the one hand, it is obvious that practical abilities must become
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part
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schools and universities. In many countries, governments give a chance to students to develop their skills in many occupations during
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and fourth
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courses
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, which provides
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great opportunities to understand if
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profession suits
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them or not.
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, I
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also
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had
such
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experience
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an experience
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during my internship, which gave me
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answers
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about what kind of things
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I really like.
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, I did not waste my time deciding on a future job after university graduation
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, I disagree with the point that we should reduce the amount of practice. We can not start to do practical part in
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the humanitarian
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or science sphere without basic knowledge.
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, you would not know how to play the piano, unless you did not learn notes.
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that, children
as well as
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adults should start with numbers, letters,
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and listening
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or reading skills, but not with
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practice. In conclusion,
although
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people mainly want to have more life-based experience, I do not support
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idea
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lack
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a lack
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of
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comprehension
in your profession area and confidence as well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • theoretical knowledge
  • practical application
  • memorizing facts
  • understanding
  • apply knowledge
  • job market
  • rote memorization
  • experiential learning
  • creativity
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving abilities
  • practical-focused curriculum
  • foundational knowledge
  • deeper understanding
  • innovation
  • diverse learning styles
  • educational system
  • adapt
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