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Some people say in all levels of English from primary schools to universities tomuch time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people argue that
education
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the education
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 system spends a lot of time
to
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 theoretical skills rather than
practical
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onespractical
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.
While
 I agree that real-based experience
seem
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seems
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 to be essential, I do not agree with the fact that learning facts time should be decreased. On the one hand, it is obvious that practical abilities must become
necessary
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a necessary
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 part
in
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of
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 schools and universities. In many countries, governments give a chance to students to develop their skills in many occupations during
third
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 and fourth
course
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courses
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, which provides
the
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apply
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great opportunities to understand if
this
 profession suits
to
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them or not.
For instance
, I
have
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also
 had
such
experience
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an experience
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 during my internship, which gave me
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answers
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 about what kind of things
do
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I really like.
Consequently
, I did not waste my time deciding on a future job after university graduation
However
, I disagree with the point that we should reduce the amount of practice. We can not start to do practical part in
humanitarian
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the humanitarian
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 or science sphere without basic knowledge.
Thus
, you would not know how to play the piano, unless you did not learn notes.
According to
 that, children
as well as
 adults should start with numbers, letters,
listening
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and listening
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 or reading skills, but not with
the
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apply
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practice. In conclusion,
although
 people mainly want to have more life-based experience, I do not support
this
 idea
due to
lack
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a lack
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 of
comprehention
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comprehension
 in your profession area and confidence as well.
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