Some people think it s good for teenagers to have part time jobs, while other people believe teenagers should not work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, there are many types of
part
Add a hyphen
part-time
time
jobs
in the country. Some people believe that teenagers
must have part
Add a hyphen
part-time
time
jobs
others people believe that teenagers
should not work. In this
essay
I will discuss Add a comma
,essay
about
both views and write down my own opinion Remove the preposition
apply
that
how I think.
On the Change preposition
on
on
hand, Correct your spelling
one
mostly
Correct your spelling
most
parents
in the USA have to tell their children to got
a work. Change the form of the verb
get
In addition
, their children must be in
18+ age up. Change preposition
apply
Hence
, Every teenagers
in Change to a singular noun
teenager
USA
might Correct article usage
the USA
have
go out to do Add the particle
tohave
part
Add a hyphen
part-time
time
jobs
after the
school. Correct article usage
apply
Such
as a fast food waiter, a cleaner, and a baby sitting
. Correct your spelling
babysitting
While
they are having
Wrong verb form
have
a
Correct article usage
apply
part
Add a hyphen
part-time
time
jobs
they can get a
own money except Change the word
their
getting
from their Verb problem
apply
parents
. However
, some parents
think that to
having a Change preposition
apply
part
Add a hyphen
part-time
time
jobs
for Fix the agreement mistake
job
teenagers
is wasting
Wrong verb form
a waste of
time
. For example
, if their kid must have a
work after school Correct article usage
apply
it
will Correct pronoun usage
they
be lose
Change the verb form
lose
the
Correct article usage
apply
time
for learning the subjects and doing the homework for school.
On the other hand
, I think that teenagers
should do a part
Add a hyphen
part-time
time
jobs
. Because making Fix the agreement mistake
job
a
money Remove the article
apply
from
other ways Change preposition
in
instead
getting
Change preposition
of getting
from
the Correct pronoun usage
it from
parents
is good
thing. Add an article
a good
For example
, teenagers
in Thailand are normally do
not have Change the verb form
normally do
a
Correct article usage
apply
part
Add a hyphen
part-time
time
jobs
. So, they do not know how to survive theire
life and do not know how getting money is not easy. They love Correct your spelling
their
there
to
Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
a
convenience
life.
In conclusion, I have described both Replace the word
convenient
of
Change preposition
apply
view
and Fix the agreement mistake
views
give
my opinion about Wrong verb form
given
teenagers
should have Correct word choice
whether teenagers
part
Add a hyphen
part-time
time
jobs
or not.Submitted by babydreamx on
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