The graph below shows the total revenue of three pizza places in Vietnam. The figures were taken in 2017. Summarise the informaton by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph illustrates the total revenue of three

pizza

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places in Vietnam. The figures were taken in 2017.

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while

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the

pizza

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company exhibited an upward trend, the figure for

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pizza hut

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Pizza Hut

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declined gradually throughout the period. In January, the figure for the

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company was nearly 35 $US

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millions

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million

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and

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it started to drop slightly to under 15 $US

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millions

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, in February.

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, from

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july

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, it began to rise dramatically, from under 15 to more than 40.

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, from August to December, it kept growing gradually to 35 $US

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millions

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. As regards, in January, the data for

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Domino Pizza

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pizza

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was more than 30 $US

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millions

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, it decreased moderately to 10 $US

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. Between March and July, it increased rapidly to 30$. From August onwards, it continued to grow gradually to 35$.

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, the figure for

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pizza hut

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Pizza Hut

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experienced a downward trend. From January to June, it rose slowly to more than 10$. After that, it decreased sharply from more than 10$

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under 5$.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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