In order to study at the university, students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree?

University
education
costs are priced and not affordable for citizens so
according to
some,
university
should be free for all
students
regardless of their background. I will challenge
this
school of thought because of an illogical idea and,
therefore
, it should be offered only to certain individuals. Granted, one might argue that giving no fees at
university
means that
students
will no longer have to work at the same time as studying to cover their expenses.
This
is predicated on the assumption that almost all people studying in America or the UK have to work both full-time and part-time
due to
high
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standard
living
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costs abroad.
However
,
this
line of reason is not sound because it fails to factor in putting
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burden financial on
government
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. Since universities have no income and
consequently
, they would rely completely on the state of funding which means taking funds from other
much needed
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areas
such
as the health system, the
transportations
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or
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elderly services. On the same perspective, some advocates suppose that providing free higher learning will increase the universalization of
education
in a country
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gives qualified staff and skilled professionals who benefit all
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aspects of
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society, especially in economics.
For instance
, some European countries
such
as Germany or Finland applied no tuition charge for their citizens, leading to a high rate of
education
and high average income per capita.
Nevertheless
, if the government offers free higher
education
for all,
students
might take it for granted and start to avoid their duties even
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they are interested or not resulting in neglecting and not focusing on their studies as they will not lose any expenses for their
education
.
To conclude
, providing free
university
education
can help a nation achieve greater heights in terms of
education
level and economy, but it may come with a price of
students
not taking the free
education
seriously because of not having to pay any fees.
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