Some children found some subject eg mathematics and philosophy,… difficult so these subjects should be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

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Are any of the
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neccessary
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necessary
? There are schoolchildren who have some difficulty in learning some
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like mathematics and philosophy ,and these
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are on the
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curriculum
of the schools and they should be taught. I believe that,
although
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everyone
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to learn these
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somehow, it should not be a must for advanced
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of these
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curses
curves
courses
. Some
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through our
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, and despite
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their difficulties,
children
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should become
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familiar
with them.
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In Mahematics
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Mathematics
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, if someone cannot calculate
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simple equation, not only are they unable to handle their life, but
also
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they are easily frauded. Math is needed
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we go shopping to adjust our
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and income.
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, when we pay for something, we have to know how much exchange the
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purchase
purchaser
should return. Philosopy is
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another example
that is
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better for
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everyone
to know it. It helps us to encounter unexpected happens and deal with them more thoughtfully.
Lessons
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like
philosopy
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philosophy
help us to expand our
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horizon
horizons
which
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to
make
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a more
precisely
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decision.
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, learning
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topics at
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or intermediate
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would be helpful.
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the other hand, schools or
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institutes
teach some difficult
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compulsory at high levels which result in some
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consequences
.
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,
children
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may become stressed and anxious, leading to health issues, lack of concentration, and low confidence.
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has been seen that people who endure
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situation
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in their lives, have
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more problems like dismal and depression.
Secondly
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,
children
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struggling with understanding hard
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,
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the opportunity to find their interests and
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to follow their dreams. In conclusion,
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on
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taught
tough
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courses
sources
like Mathematics and
philosopy
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philosophy
could be obligatory at
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fondumental
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fundamental
level
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to enable
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for
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their
life
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,
however
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, it is better that advanced
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level
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levels
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of those
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are
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considered
voluntary to allow the
children
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to find their pursuit and avoid stress. As I
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mentioned
earlier,
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maybe
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it is beneficial for
children
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to grasp these forced
lessons
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just as much as they will need in the future.
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