Some people believe that it is better to live and work in a veryical city with multiple tall buildings, as compayto a horizontal city with fewer tall buildings. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is a debatable issue between groups of
people
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whether vertical
cities
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with numerous skyscrapers have better living and working conditions or the horizontal
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with fewer tall buildings should be considered favourable.
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my opinion, the former and latter view have their own benefits which I will discuss
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.
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with, the city having apartments is the first choice of some sections of
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because of high-paid jobs and more career-oriented opportunities.
Cities
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like Delhi and Mumbai have enormous populations working there to accomplish their goals. It is quite easy to get promotions and to do dream jobs in developed
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, the
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whose predominant aim is to have a luxurious lifestyle, prefer to reside in big
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. In terms of living conditions,
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provide modern amenities, quality education, and easy accessibility which gravitate folks to dwell there where they can live comfortably.
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, some civilians choose to live in spacious houses which they can merely get in horizontal
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. It is better to reside in ventilated houses rather than apartments which are mostly suffocated because of less space availability.
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, housing is not only the reason behind living in horizontal areas but
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its pollution-free environment.
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like these generally have less population,
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congestion on roads ,
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a clean and healthy ambience.
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, plenty of jobs are available in developing
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too even though workplaces are not advanced enough like vertical
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, one can compromise laborious work with less salary for clean and fresh air. In conclusion, I believe that living and working standards are totally dependent on
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's preference, who want to focus on lifestyle would prefer the city with tall buildings since it can provide cutting-edge facilities to them ,
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however
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the folks who are more into healthy living would opt to reside in horizontal areas.
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