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Some people say that only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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A group of individuals present the view that the sole aim of studying a foreign
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 is for
traveling
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 or employment possibilities in other countries,
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 others believe there are other motivations for learning a new
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. I strongly agree with the latter opinion.
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 with, the advancement in technology and globalization have enabled humans to be more connected than ever before and numerous
people
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 are willing to interact with others and make friends since they believe it brings them the opportunity to broaden their horizons through being exposed to the new culture and customs.
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, some
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 justifiably argue that being familiar with a foreign
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 plays a primary role in
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 matter and explains why
people
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 learn a new
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 aside from pleasure or business. To clarify, there are several applications that make it possible to know
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 globally and if you learned English, which is the most spoken
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 in the world, you would be able to know new individuals and their culture.
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, another group of
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 claim that learning a non-native
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 is vital to
traveling
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 overseas or seeking job opportunities since if a person does not know the destination
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, they would encounter major communication problems and
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language
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 barrier can be frustrating.
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, when someone moves abroad to apply for a new job, on the first days, they need to fill out applications and do paperwork for a visa or when a tourist travels to a country for pleasure, they have to find addresses, book hotels, etc. Unquestionably, all of these tasks require proficiency in that foreign
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, and from their point of view that’s the only purpose of studying a new
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. In a nutshell, in my view, a person can learn a foreign
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 not only for employment possibilities or touristic purposes but
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 one’s can benefit from a new
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 to gain insight into a new culture and meet new
people
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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