Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, some individuals consider that
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is one of the best ways to learn on educational platforms.
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, others think that these days science and
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are more important than story. From my point of view,
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is more significant than others and in
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essay, I will discuss both views,support them with some examples and give my own opinion.
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,
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is the best way for a past generation to transfer their experience to new nations.
Scientists
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have spent years to understand the meaning of ancient people's stories like Babylon
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because they believe that can learn lots of valuable information ,
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they can teach the younger generation through universities.
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, the Oslo library gives a 20% discount to individuals who decide to study story books, so teachers consider that reading
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notes has increased society's knowledge.
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, because of
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recent
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like the
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some people think that science and
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have more impact than
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. In that way,
scientists
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have used them to research issues sensitive to the past.
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, David Rose was the first person who invested in our earth and space,
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he wrote 100 hundred books, but now because of recent giants not only do researchers
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the space deeply but they
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don't accept Rose's past theories about our earth.
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never
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the past
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data. In conclusion, histories have significant information from past nations, so studying the books related to them is very important. But on the opposite regarding
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scientists
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have new views about
history
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therefore
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they don't want to spend their time to understand the old stories.
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