Computers are becoming an essential part of education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that

computers

are becoming an integral part of the academic system.

While

there are some visible drawbacks

such

as how overuse the

computers

can affect our

eyesight

or induce pupils to cheat on their

homework

, I believe that with supervised school,

this

trend is positive in

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education.

To begin

with, advanced computer technology can help pupils gain

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knowledge

easier

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.

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with the past, they

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no longer need to search the information through

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paper. It

become

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more time-saving and

allow

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learners to absorb the knowledge in wider ranges by browsing the internet.

In addition

, using

computer

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as an educational measure can reduce the expenditure from the large amount of textbooks,

also

, protecting our environment

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curtailing paper used. With

computers

, there is no necessity to buy textbooks or any academic resources which are made

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paper.

Consequently

, helping people to save money and creating an environmentally friendly world in

this

process.

On the other hand

,

this

technological development can potentially affect the youngster’s

eyesight

by using it inappropriately. If

computers

are

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instead

the

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original resources,

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implied

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that

students

need to approach their electronic devices not only in school but

also

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their

homework

time.

As a result

, their

eyesight

will be weakened in

this

process.

Secondly

,

this

might cause

students

to cheat on their

homework

as well. Pupils can simply click the

botton

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button

and get their required answer without thinking in their brain,

subsequently

decreasing their quality of education. From my perspective,

although

there are several demerits in

this

measure, they are not insurmountable. If their teachers can educate how important to maintain their

eyesight

and the correct way of using

computers

, it can significantly ensure

students

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approach it properly.

Moreover

,

preventing

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them from cheating on their

homework

, faculty members can develop certain

regulation

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to

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students

from deceiving. Eventually,

making

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computers

becoming

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uncontroversial and acceptable

to

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our educational environment.