You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter . say how you feel about his performance . give details of your musical activities . explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

Dear Mike How are you
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Guess what? I have been to your concert in Sydney
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week and really enjoyed it! My best concert ever! As far as your performance on stage, I found it amazing when you sang with the choral. Your idea to bring children from disability school and give them a chance to sing with you was excellent! All the public liked that! Well, I’m a teacher of teenagers at Saint Andree School in Perth, and we play guitar! My students adore you, and I taught them
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few songs from you which they liked playing. They are really good, you would be surprised! Anyway, do you know how you can help me with my musical activities? I know you will come
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few days to Perth for your next concert and really appreciate it if you could come to give them some advice! What can be better than a Professional? So, can’t wait to see you, I hope you will visit us, take care, see you soon! Tony
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • stellar performance
  • captivating
  • musical prowess
  • talent
  • repertoire
  • collaboration
  • mentorship
  • resonate
  • aspiring musician
  • composition
  • rendition
  • inspirational
  • vocal range
  • harmonize
  • skillset
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