Some people believe more actions can be taken to prevent crime, while others think that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, tackling crime is one of the most virtual issues that

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society has to deal with,

besides

, that it is possible to introduce the effection.

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essay will illustrate that more action should be taken so as to create a

safety

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public. On the one hand, crime

appear

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appears

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a lot but it is

also

can be prevented by many measures

such

as

finace

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finance

punishment,

go

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to jail,

public

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and public

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benefit activities. In many cities, the criminal rate has been lower through

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criminal education,

inhabitants

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and inhabitants

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not

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have not

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to became

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the target of criminals

due to

they can protect themselves.

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statement is

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common problem

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can easily solved by citizens. Taking responsibility is crucial for each person individually.

On the other hand

, there are many people

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who believed

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believed

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believe

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that few of them can be done,

many

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and many

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offenders have their own way

to deny

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of denying

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faults.

For instance

,

such

as poor individuals say that they steal money in order to support their families and themself. Lots of defendants have mind problems that they can not recognize and control their actions

lead

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to many types of crime

can

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that can

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not be solved. Nobody

denounce

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denounces

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them and vices keep going to happen. In conclusion, both statements have their advantages and disadvantages but more and more actions should be taken to

detaine

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determine

as much as it can. Safety is the best.