Some people believe more actions can be taken to prevent crime, while others think that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, tackling crime is one of the most virtual issues that
the
society has to deal with, Correct article usage
apply
besides
, that it is possible to introduce the effection. This
essay will illustrate that more action should be taken so as to create a safety
public.
On the one hand, crime Replace the word
safe
appear
a lot but it is Change the verb form
appears
also
can be prevented by many measures such
as finace
punishment, Correct your spelling
finance
go
to jail, Wrong verb form
going
public
benefit activities. In many cities, the criminal rate has been lower through Correct word choice
and public
the
criminal education, Correct article usage
apply
inhabitants
Correct word choice
and inhabitants
not
Add a missing verb
have not
to became
the target of criminals Verb problem
become
due to
they can protect themselves. This
statement is the
common problem Correct article usage
a
which
can easily solved by citizens. Taking responsibility is crucial for each person individually.
Correct pronoun usage
that
On the other hand
, there are many people Correct pronoun usage
who believed
believed
that few of them can be done, Wrong verb form
believe
many
offenders have their own way Correct word choice
and many
to deny
faults. Change preposition
of denying
For instance
, such
as poor individuals say that they steal money in order to support their families and themself. Lots of defendants have mind problems that they can not recognize and control their actions lead
to many types of crime Wrong verb form
leading
can
not be solved. Nobody Correct pronoun usage
that can
denounce
them and vices keep going to happen.
In conclusion, both statements have their advantages and disadvantages but more and more actions should be taken to Change the verb form
denounces
detaine
as much as it can. Safety is the best.Correct your spelling
determine
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