“The table shows the average length of video advertisements on the internet and the average length of time viewers spend watching them. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.”
The given table represents the average length of advertisements ranging across different areas and the
time
spent by viewers on them.
Overall
, the longest running time
is for the public service and also
the individuals spend the most time
on it. In the case of the other remaining ones, there are two divisions based on their length; one that is
in their thirty-second and higher range; the other falling from twenty to thirty seconds.
Firstly
, for the twenty to thirty-second range, the broadcasting is from the sectors which include travel, retail, consumer electronics, clothing, and pharmaceuticals. Amongst all of them, the first in the list has the most telecasting run which is 28.7 and the others have less than that. This
pattern also
holds true in case of the time
a particular user stays.
On the other hand
, for the thirty-second and higher range, various divisions are there which include business and finance, entertainment and news, technology, and lifestyle. Technology rules in this
area in terms of their length but for the case of maximum time
spent, the entertainment and news take the spot. Lastly
, the public services stand the highest with 66.7 and 28.1 seconds for the time
spent by users.Submitted by patelharnish38 on
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