Unhealthy food has negative effect on both individuals and on the society they live in. Some people think that the government should tax the unhealthy food while others say that fat tax is unfair an unnecessary. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Healthy
food
is delicious
source for people can have a good background in mental health, which means we should choose to use healthy Add an article
the delicious
a delicious
food
to build strength. On the other hand
, all of us know that unhealthy food
has a better smell, so somebody
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some
thinks
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think
government
should balance it with them to compare with healthy Add an article
the government
food
. In this
essay, i
will discuss about pros and cons of Change the capitalization
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this
problem.
Firstly
, unhealthy food
usually
more delicious Add a missing verb
is usually
to compare
with healthy Change the verb form
compared
food
, one of Correct article usage
the food
food
which we might eat Fix the agreement mistake
foods
everyday
is Replace the word
every day
fastfood
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fast food
such
as: chicken fired
, potatoes, or meat. So, the amount of return for that type of Correct your spelling
fried
food
always
more than Add a missing verb
is always
healthy
foods. Government Change preposition
for healthy
take
some laws about tax for unhealthy Wrong verb form
taking
food
have some positive points, people can use less them because it will has
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have
higher
price. That Add an article
a higher
mean
, people might protect their health when Change the verb form
means
involve
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involved
unhealthy
foods, which Change preposition
in unhealthy
has
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have
large
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a large
the
amount of oil.
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apply
By contrast
, somebody
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some
are
not agree with laws Verb problem
do
which
take more Correct pronoun usage
that
taxs
for unhealthy food
to compare
with healthy Change the verb form
compared
food
, because they believe it is similar
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a similar
the similar
food
source. In addition
, if Correct article usage
the goverment
goverment
take Correct your spelling
government
taxs
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taxes
taxis
for
unhealthy Change preposition
on
food
, more and more restaurants and individuals try to ignore taxs
, Correct your spelling
taxes
tax
it
can be Correct pronoun usage
which
negative
point for Add an article
a negative
citizen
of that country.
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a citizen
the citizen
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In conclusion
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, Correct your spelling
In conclusion
i
believe Change the capitalization
I
government
should not make Correct article usage
the government
law
about extra Add an article
a law
taxs
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taxes
tax
for
unhealthy Change preposition
on
food
because i
can be Correct pronoun usage
it
make
harmful Verb problem
apply
for
both Change preposition
to
health
and income Correct pronoun usage
their health
of
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apply
them
, and it Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
increase
guiltiesChange the verb form
increases
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