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You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like say what experience and skills you have

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing you to register
your
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 employment agency for
full-time
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a full-time
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laboratory
 technician job. I am Jennifer Ramos, residing at the Park Avenue residential complex in Alaska. Recently I
have
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moved to Alaska with my family from New York. I am looking for a job as
senior
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a senior
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 medical
laboratory
 technologist in reputed hospitals. I am post
graduated
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 in medical
laboratory
 technology and
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fifteen years
experience
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of experience
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 in the field in various multi-speciality laboratories including Mayo Clinic Laboratories, New York. I am recognised with various awards including the best employee in the Myo Clinic
laboratory
. I have
also
 a valid license to practice in New York which is convertible to Alaska health care. Please let me know of any positions suitable for me. I look forward to hearing from you, Yours faithfully, Jennifer Ramos
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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