Female are better student than male. Discuss both view and give your opinion

There are many beliefs that female

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better than male when it

come

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to studying,

while

other think

opposite

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the opposite

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. In the writer's opinion, female students are

success

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more successful

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in studying than

male

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males

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because of their haute

disipline

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discipline

. It must be understood that females are more

self - aware

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their ability.

This

is

due to

female

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females

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fully

comprehene

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comprehend

comprehensive

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themself both

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their

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strength

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strengths

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and

weakness

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weaknesses

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.

As a result

,

female

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females

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develop and make the most of their potential to achieve

success

, simultaneously, they fix and

and

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improve their weakness through learning progress. From the writer's experience, female students tend to have the best

score

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scores

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at school

becuse

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because

of

self awareness

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self-awareness

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and the

abilty

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ability

to learn from mistakes.

Thus

, female  

self - aware

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and improve to become

better

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a better

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version.

However

, there are some people

argue

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that most prominent world

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are men. To put it planly, male can

develp

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develop

their talent

one

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in one

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specific area and use all concentration

also

passion for that

filed

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field

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, especially research and analysis subjects.

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,

male

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males

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may

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be preceived

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preceived

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perceived

as leaders and

quiet

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quite

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succes

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successful

in one field.

This

point may be true but

male

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males

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just spend

thier

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their

focus on a specific subject

while

female

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females

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concentrate

all

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on all

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field

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fields

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equally.

In

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the writer's perspective,

female

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females

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really appreciate

discipline

in work and study. To explain in

the

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further

detail,

female

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females

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can control themself from

procrastinations

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procrastinating

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and manage time effectively. In

other word

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, they

priotize

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prioritise

their studies above distractions,

push

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and push

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themself

into

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to

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high

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a high

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level of

discipline

to

achive

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achieve

goal

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goals

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.

For example

, a

femal

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female

student who

have

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has

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a

part time

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job after school still

maitain

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maintain

maintains

a high GPA because of her

discipline

in

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at

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work and

strict

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with

herslf

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herself

.

Therefore

, the

abilty

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ability

of

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to

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discipline

help

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helps

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female

success

. In conclusion,

although

most

of

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apply

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male

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males

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achive

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achieve

goal

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goals

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in a specific area, female have

a

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greater

success

overall

because they

self-

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are

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aware

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self-aware

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their

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of their

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ability and have

discipline

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disciplined

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habit

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habits

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in work.