Female are better student than male. Discuss both view and give your opinion

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There are many beliefs that female
are
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is

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better than male when it
come
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comes

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to studying,
while
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other think
opposite
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the opposite

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. In the writer's opinion, female students are
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success
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more successful

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in studying than
male
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males

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because of their haute
disipline
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discipline

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. It must be understood that females are more
self - aware
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self-aware of

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their ability.
This
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is
due to
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female
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females

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fully
comprehene
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comprehend
comprehensive
comprehended

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themself both
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their

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strength
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strengths

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and
weakness
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weaknesses

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.
As a result
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,
female
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females

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develop and make the most of their potential to achieve
success
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, simultaneously, they fix and
and
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apply

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improve their weakness through learning progress. From the writer's experience, female students tend to have the best
score
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scores

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at school
becuse
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because

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of
self awareness
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self-awareness

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and the
abilty
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ability

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to learn from mistakes.
Thus
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, female  
self - aware
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self-aware

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and improve to become
better
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a better

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version.
However
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, there are some people
argue
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who argue

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that most prominent world
figure
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figures

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are men. To put it planly, male can
develp
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develop

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their talent
one
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in one

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specific area and use all concentration
also
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passion for that
filed
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field

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, especially research and analysis subjects.
Hence
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,
male
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males

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may
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preceived
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perceived

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as leaders and
quiet
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quite

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succes
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successful

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in one field.
This
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point may be true but
male
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males

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just spend
thier
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their

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focus on a specific subject
while
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female
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females

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concentrate
all
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on all

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field
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fields

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equally.
In
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From

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the writer's perspective,
female
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females

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really appreciate
discipline
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in work and study. To explain in
the
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apply

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further
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detail,
female
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females

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can control themself from
procrastinations
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procrastinating

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and manage time effectively. In
other word
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another word
other words

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, they
priotize
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prioritise

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their studies above distractions,
push
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and push

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themself
into
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to

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high
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a high
the high

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level of
discipline
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to
achive
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achieve

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goal
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goals

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.
For example
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, a
femal
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female

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student who
have
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has

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a
part time
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part-time

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job after school still
maitain
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maintain
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a high GPA because of her
discipline
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in
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at

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work and
strict
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with
herslf
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herself

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.
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, the
abilty
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ability

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of
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discipline
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help
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helps

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female
success
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. In conclusion,
although
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most
of
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male
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males

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achive
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achieve

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goal
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goals

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in a specific area, female have
a
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greater
success
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overall
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because they
self-
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are

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aware
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self-aware

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their
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of their

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ability and have
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Use synonyms

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discipline
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disciplined

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habit
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habits

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in work.

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