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The chart below shows the proportions of the world's oil resource held in different areas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the proportions of the world's oil resource held in different areas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart depicts the proportions of the global
oil
resources
 occupied in 10 different regions and the
oil
 consumption share yearly in the same regions. Looking from an
overall
 perspective,
while
Middle
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 East holds the largest amount of
oil
resources
,
Australia
 and New
Zealand
 have the smallest percentages.
Moreover
, Asia and the United States are the
world
's main
oil
 consumers
whereas
Australia
 and New
Zealand
 consume the least. As can be inferred from the chart, it is evident that the area holding the most
oil
resources
 is
Middle
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the Middle
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 East, with 56.52%, over
a
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half of total
world
oil
 sources. When it comes to
oil
 consumption each year, the amount of
oil
 Asia and the US consume is far less than the
oil
 sources they hold. The percentages of
oil
 consumption
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 the US and Asia are 25.48% and 26.21%, respectively. They are the biggest
oil
 consumer in the
world
. In terms of
oil
resources
,
Australia
 and New
Zealand
 are the areas with the
least
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lowest
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 percentages, followed by Western Europe
and
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the United States and other countries, making up a small proportion
under
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 2%.
In addition
, only 1.31% of
oil
 is consumed by
Australia
 and New
Zealand
 every year, making them the
world
's smallest
oil
 consumers.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, resources, australia, zealand, world with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportions" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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