The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied diagram depicts the process by which leather products are made for retail.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is really apparent that Linking Words
this
procedure comprises 10 stages, commencing with drying animal Linking Words
skin
and concluding with producing leather items Use synonyms
such
as bags or shoes.
If we examine the phases in detail, we can observe that Linking Words
initially
animal Linking Words
skin
is hanged and dried. Use synonyms
After
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this
, it is taken to a factory by a lorry. Once inside, it is washed in a liquid Linking Words
that is
a mixture of water and lime, and following that, the Linking Words
skin
is soaked in lime .
The process continues with flattening the Use synonyms
skin
, which is later soaked again but Use synonyms
this
time in Tannin, which is a liquid composed of water and vegetable matter. Linking Words
Subsequently
, it is polished and a lorry is used to take the product to a different factory, where various leather goods Linking Words
such
as balls, bags, and shoes will be produced from Linking Words
this
material.Linking Words
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