The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied diagram depicts the process by which leather products are made for retail.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is really apparent that this
procedure comprises 10 stages, commencing with drying animal skin
and concluding with producing leather items such
as bags or shoes.
If we examine the phases in detail, we can observe that initially
animal skin
is hanged and dried. After
this
, it is taken to a factory by a lorry. Once inside, it is washed in a liquid that is
a mixture of water and lime, and following that, the skin
is soaked in lime .
The process continues with flattening the skin
, which is later soaked again but this
time in Tannin, which is a liquid composed of water and vegetable matter. Subsequently
, it is polished and a lorry is used to take the product to a different factory, where various leather goods such
as balls, bags, and shoes will be produced from this
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