The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram details the process of making leather products.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The supplied diagram depicts the process by which leather products are made for retail. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is really apparent that
this
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procedure comprises 10 stages, commencing with drying animal
skin
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and concluding with producing leather items
such
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as bags or shoes. If we examine the phases in detail, we can observe that
initially
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animal
skin
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is hanged and dried.
After
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this
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, it is taken to a factory by a lorry. Once inside, it is washed in a liquid
that is
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a mixture of water and lime, and following that, the
skin
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is soaked in lime . The process continues with flattening the
skin
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, which is later soaked again but
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time in Tannin, which is a liquid composed of water and vegetable matter.
Subsequently
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, it is polished and a lorry is used to take the product to a different factory, where various leather goods
such
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as balls, bags, and shoes will be produced from
this
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material.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words skin with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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