You have just read an article in an inernational travel magazie which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of magazie. IN your letter - Correct the information in the article - Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information - Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter regarding the article called" Life with Travellers" you published in the Australian magazine on the 22nd of May that misinformation about my city is Galle. Since I have seen
this
, I have been dismayed because it had the wrong details about my city. The first one is that you mentioned the temple of Rumassala has a variety of herbal environment that comes from the era of King Raawana in India. But it should be corrected as in Sri Lanka.
Moreover
, the majority of tourists and native people are inclined to refer to your documentary paper before coming to their eye-catching places. Sometimes the wrong notes will lead to the dark sides of the city.
Hence
you should be responsible for all the words when socializing with the public. I would like to give my opinion to prevent
such
of these things. Your company can organize a group table for approval journals for the paperwork. If you could consider my request. It will be highly appreciated. Hopefully, I will receive positive feedback next newspaper. Thank you in advance. Yours faithfully., Esh.
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