Some people believe that celebrity personal events ia a waste of money. Others feel that these celebrations play an important role in the lives of individual and in society as a whole. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that
celebrity
events
can be a waste of money
. However
, others believe famous people
's events
have an important role
in some individual lives and in society
. This
essay will develop both points of view. In my opinion, I think celebrity
events
do not play any important role
in society
and they should be avoided.
On one side, celebrity
events
usually involve a high amount of money
and this
kind of event can be quite superficial. The main reason for that celebrities
usually try to get high-quality dresses from expensive branches with jewellery. This
can have a negative impact on people
which not have enough money
and trying to copy celebrities
can get into debt,so that kind of event should not be so popular. For
example
, a person in the UK spent a large amount of money
to look similar to David Beckham in one of the recent events
that caused him a debt of 16,000 pounds.
On the other side, people
think these events
can help society
and individuals such
as personal development or society
role
. The main reason for that is
some celebrities
can be model roles for other individuals which in some cases can be positive because can get people
motivated to do sport for
example
. However
, these cases are the minority of celebrities
in most cases they are not a good example
to follow. This
can have a negative impact on children which can be influenced easily by celebrity
stereotyping. For
example
, Love Island which is really popular in the UK has many negative models for children who follow them.
In conclusion, there are different points of view about celebrity
events
. One of them is they are a waste of money
and on the other ,side this
event with celebrities
has an important role
in our society
. In this
essay discussed these two points of view and I gave my opinion.Submitted by usoncata on
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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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- moreover
- also
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- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
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