The diagram below shows how cheese is made. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how cheese is made.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram provided shows the procedure through which the cheese is made.
This
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procedure has 9 steps which start from the accidification and ends with supplying it in the market.
To begin
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with, acidification is the first step of the
overall
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process where raw material and bacteria are put in the jar and
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then
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mixed with it as a catalyst to speed up the chemical reactions of acidification. The result of acidification comes in the shape of solidification which is
then
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turned turns into small pieces. After cutting the curds into small pieces, the small curds start heating and draining in the pressure cooker. In the sixth step of the procedure, salt is added and
then
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starts giving it a proper shape through machines.
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, the fermentation process takes place which takes around 2 months. After that, the cheese gets ready and is packaged properly.
This
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is how cheese is prepared through certain procedures and in the end, the finished goods are supplied to the market.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pasteurization
  • standardization
  • starter culture
  • fermentation
  • bacteria
  • coagulation
  • rennet
  • curds
  • whey
  • curd processing
  • draining
  • molding
  • pressing
  • ripening
  • distribution
  • controlled conditions
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