Write an article about the advantages and disadvantages of the internet

2-Write an article about the advantages and disadvantages of the
Internet
. Nowadays
Internet
is used in our daily
life
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but the idea of using
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internet
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is a mixed blessing for various reasons. From one point of view,
internet
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helps
students
to find answers that.. help them in their studies.
This
means that
students
could find answers. far their studies without the need to ask their teachers. That makes it easier ...far..
students
to do their homework.
episteaty
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epistatic
expicialy
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especially
explicitly
. in.. mathithathics and physics. From another point of
View
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,
internet
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is the main cause for distracting
students
from their studies where
students
use
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internet
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to play online games or even chat with their friends.
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will
leed
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to
undone
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homework or even failing one of the subjects. To sum it all up there are pros and
con's
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to
internet
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, but if you use it wisely it
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be better.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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