The table gives information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014.

The table gives information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table gives information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014.
The table illustrates five categories of
vehicles
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in Australia and their registered amount in 2010, 2012 and 2014 respectively. The table
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shows the percentage
change
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of all
vehicles
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from 2010 to 2014 in the
last
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column. The first type of vehicle is passenger
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which stands the second amount. It started at 11800000 in 2010, increased to 12700000 in 2012 and ended at 13000000. Meanwhile, the percent
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is 10.2%. Commercial
vehicles
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were the most in all years and gradually increased. They are 2.3, 2.6 and 2.7 million respectively. The difference is 17.4%. Motorcycles had the biggest
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which was 30.8%. The final number ended at 709000. Heavy
trucks
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and light
trucks
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are both lower than 50000 at all times and they finished at 416000 and 131000 respectively. The differences are 8.3% and 23.5%. In conclusion, commercial cars were the most
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, light
trucks
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as the least. Motorcycles had the greatest increase and heavy
trucks
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had the least
change
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words vehicles, change, trucks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • trends
  • registration
  • vehicles
  • comparison
  • categories
  • growth
  • decline
  • significant
  • increase
  • decrease
  • surge
  • consistent
  • pattern
  • speculate
  • factors
  • economic conditions
  • consumer preferences
  • advancements
  • technology
  • implications
  • infrastructure
  • environment
  • societal behaviors
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