the graph below shows the annual visitor to new zealand from 5 countries for the years 1996 to 2014.

the graph below shows the annual visitor to new zealand from 5 countries for the years 1996 to 2014.
The line graph compares, the yearly visitors from 5 different countries between the years 1996 to 2014 in New Zealand. To summarize, in the given period Australian people visited signified the highest followed by the
USA
and the rest were insignificant. In the year 1996, the expenditure in New Zealand was 5 in
China
, approximately 490 in the UK and Japan, 800 in the
USA
and approximately 1000 in Australia.Till the period 2002, visits to New Zealand slightly declined in the UK, rapidly processed in
China
, Japan and Australia
whereas
, in the
USA
, it went up and down till 2004.
Further
, gradual improvement was noted in the UK,
China
and Australia until 2004,
while
slowly decreased in Japan. Australian people continuously visited till 2006, reduced in 2008
then
slowly increased few years immediately rising down to 2000 in the period 2014.
On the contrary
, it had a great expenditure till 2010 and fell down to 1100 in the
USA
at the end
of the year.
However
, the least witnessed was
China
with a minor upgrade of 450 and the rest of the countries were negligible.
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