The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world. Summer use the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and male comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world.

Summer use the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and male comparisons where relevant.
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The above bar graph illustrates the information about the percentage of people living in the urban areas in different parts of the world where the
population
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was categorised into five different age groups.
Overall
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, we can see the highest
number
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of
population
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between ages 25-54 were residing in urban areas
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the lowest
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of residents were people aged between 55-64. In 1990 we can see approximately 30% of people aged 25-54 were residing there
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in 2000 the
number
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of residents rose to nearly 35%.
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, in 2010, the
population
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rose nearly to 40%, and in 2020, the
population
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reached approximately 50% and became the highest among all. After that, we can see the decreasing
number
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of residents aged 0-14 between 1990-2020.
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, we can see the decreasing
number
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of teenagers between 1990-2020 and was lowest in 2020. The
population
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aged 55-64 is slightly decreasing from approximately 13% to nearly 10% between 1990 and 2020. In a similar manner, we can see a slight increase in the
population
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starting from 65 years and reaching 15%.
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